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    A very pretty picture. "Beautiful" indeed. This...

    A very pretty picture. "Beautiful" indeed. This spot held the most potential for pay-off of all the entries. The message was clean and simple. The V/O was authoritative and compelling. The sound...
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    Good tonal control. Period FX are good but maybe...

    Good tonal control. Period FX are good but maybe too colorful. Nice V/O and music selection. Electric fire bolt and smoldering ash was tasty. I really wanted to meet Timmy's friends. I don't know...
  3. This could be much stronger as a :30. (falling...

    This could be much stronger as a :30. (falling :10 short of a :60) Re-cut this and watch it work much better. Use close-ups.
  4. Pleasant and easy to watch. The product 'pop-on'...

    Pleasant and easy to watch. The product 'pop-on' insert did not hold to the look and feel of the mother and child footage and would not have been missed.
    A handheld move across a picnic blanket and...
  5. The actors turned in a fine performance. I wanted...

    The actors turned in a fine performance. I wanted to believe the 'know-it-all' was perhaps a professor. "What are you doing here, Dr. Deign?"
    It could open possibilities for gags, props, story...
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    At least there was no goat screaming like a...

    At least there was no goat screaming like a human. I dunno... that might have helped. Suggestion: Write the whole story down first and then read it aloud to someone who has never heard you talking...
  7. This is a very nice story acting as a vehicle for...

    This is a very nice story acting as a vehicle for education and instruction. It would be interesting to explore the "question/answer" dialog between mother and child to increase the natural learning...
  8. Recycling: The Essentials, WholeBrainFilms

    Here is the Vimeo link to our entry:


    https://vimeo.com/130505767
    https://vimeo.com/130505767


    credits:

    Concept: Russ Haan / Walter Smith
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    Hello Stephen, We are almost done with our :30...

    Hello Stephen,
    We are almost done with our :30 entry to the SpotFest. I am unfamiliar with the technical parameters of the rules and regs regarding submission.
    What is the best way to get this spot...
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    "SpotFest" - Spring 2015 - Recycle!

    Alright, we are officially in the game. Add WholeBrainFilms to the SpotFest, please. We are trying not to leave the best bits on the cutting room floor! (should be done early next week)
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